I’ve been working on and off with this painting for some months now, but without resolving it. There are bits that work, bits that I really love, but overall the composition doesn’t hold together for me. There are too many conflicts on a mark-making and texture level; it lacks overall unity.
You can’t really see it in the photo, but there’s a lot of texture paste in the foreground and around the edge of the coast, with a little on the hill. When the light hit the canvas at an angle, or up close, it’s very evident.
I still like the idea behind this composition, inspired by a nearby bit of rocky coast where there’s a small bay and a sea stack, but think I’ll turn this canvas to the wall and start anew. Less texture, and a change of season so there’s less green too. Maybe a snowy day, so the hills and sea are closer in colour?









